Creative dota hero

Khain, God's Right Hand by Beutrano

Theme: 11/20
Only the ultimate really feels Godly. Not having a story hurts. Passive skills never, ever go first.

Functionality of Abilities: 12/20
1st skill: 2/5
Smells like Team Spirit Nirvana Stout Shield. The two effects seem to do the same thing.
2nd skill: 5/5

3rd skill: 2/5
Knockback + Stun = Pissed off enemies. 450 range is massive.
Ultimate: 3/5
Okay, it's cool, but it reminds me a lot of Shallow Grave, and a three minute cooldown does not make this spell very useful.

Balance: 3/5
Knockback and Stun on skill 3 is way too much.
Overall presentation of the HI: 3/5
Most of it's colourful, but it kinda loses it towards the end. No real colour theme.
Total: 33/50

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Daimyo, the Makrura King by Goblins


Theme: 20/20

Functionality of Abilities: 18/20
1st skill: 5/5

2nd skill: 5/5

3rd skill: 5/5

Ultimate: 3/5
The "adding 3 seconds to negative buffs" could be quite difficult to do, and at the very least, annoying.

Balance: 5/5

Overall presentation of the HI: 5/5

Total: 48/50

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Li'l Timmy, the Demented Toymaster by Kodiak Teddy

Theme: 20/20

Functionality of Abilities: 17/20
1st skill: 3.5/5
Reminds me a bit of Toss. That can't really be helped. Cool skill, though.
2nd skill: 3.5/5
O hai, Storm Seeker! The Cooldown appears to be less than the duration for level 4; I don't know whether that was intentional or not, but it could make problems.
3rd skill: 5/5

Ultimate: 5/5


Balance: 4/5
It doesn't make sense, having highly melee-centric spells on a ranged Intelligence hero with abysmal Strength.

Overall presentation of the HI: 3/5
Colour scheme is kinda painful, but at least you have one.
Total: 44/50

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Jodore, the Grand Magician by xzuw

Theme: 20/20

Functionality of Abilities: 17/20
1st skill: 3/5
Whoah, extremely complicated.

2nd skill: 5/5

3rd skill: 4/5
Again, very complicated

Ultimate: 5/5


Balance: 5/5

Overall presentation of the HI: 5/5

Total: 47/50

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Khain, God's Right Hand: 33/50
Daimyo, the Makrura King: 48/50
Li'l Timmy, the Demented Toymaster: 44/50
Jodore, the Grand Magician: 47/50
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